How's my driving? How can I improve with Nic and Lalamon? Yes, they're original characters, but are they consistent, believable, etc?

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Happy Father's Day, Dad.

I hope you're not too worried about Ash and me. We're doing okay, mostly, except Ash is sad right now because his girlfriend and people we know here disappeared. And I'm trying to stay away from digimon like you told me, even if that's really hard here. Did you know Ash was hiding one for ages? Right in our house?

Oh, Ash bought me a pet, a digignome thing. I know it sounds like digimon but he's not like that at all, he's really harmless and sweet, couldn't hurt a fly. I named him after Mum's dog.

I wish I could come home to you and Mum and Dani and Kenzie, I really do. But I hope you still had a good Father's Day with Dani and Kenzie.

Love you, Dad.

Oh my goodness!

Thank you to whoever must have fished me out of the hot springs!

And huh, why has Ash come home saying something about "at least this time I was somewhere I knew"?

Even when I'm human she still won't talk to me... D:

It's weird being ground-bound though. How do you humans cope having to stay on the ground all the time, never being able to just pick a nice breeze and go with it...

This Halloween thing that all the Tamers keep talking about...

Would anyone like a Tamer-only party? Because I want my Tamer to have fun on Halloween without freaking out about me. :( 'specially cos it's her birthday the next day.

So if anyone knows someone who might like to come to the party her brother and stupid Gomamon and I are putting together, tell me. :D

(OOC: Chances are high this won't actually be logged, just fyi.)

Hello! My name's Lalamon, and I'm Nic's partner, if denial isn't just a river in Egypt.

I'm starting to think we need a club for us digimon whose partners hate what we are. :( I mean, Pukamon is nice if an idiot, but he doesn't get it, his partner came around, and I don't know if mine ever will.

This place is scary.

Not just all the digimon everywhere...even at Ash's work. D: The attack, with the robots... It was like a really bad movie, things blowing up everywhere; I'm glad we got away. But why did we come back, this place is obviously dangerous! And all the frozen people... They were like statues, I don't want that to happen to me! Even if it happened to Ash and he was fine.

I miss Mum and Dad, and my sisters, especially Dani... Olette is really nice, though. Nicer than me.

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a window downstairs just broke why did the window break are we being attacked again

(OOC: Strikes unreadable. Dunno how she managed that, actually. Oh, Akino, Dani's her twin sister; Olette would probably know from Ash.)

What just happened? I close my eyes for one second and suddenly I'm the only one on the carriage... And there's something on my arm and my cellphone changed!

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Why isn't it recognizing triple zero any more? I need help, I need the army or something: There's this talking flowerbud going on about DIGIMON...

Mum, where'd you go...?

(OOC: Oh yeah, assume all of her replies to comments are also voiceposts. It's hard to txt and run!)